Design Research Dissertation/ Draft Dissertation

23/08/21 - 27/09/21 (Week 1 - Week 6)
Yu Dawei(0344780)
Design Research Dissertation
Draft Dissertation

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INSTRUCTION

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Draft Dissertation

Week 1 Matrix & Table Content Draft
This week,  I make a google drive folder and name it as Ms Hayati asked me to do and share it in Google classroom. I added 3 folders in my drive and put the cover page into the draft dissertation. Then, I reviewed 5 critical reviews and made a matrix.

Week 2 

Disconnected and can't join class, I keep doing my literature review in my draft dissertation.

Week 3

1. Finish literature review 

2. Start writing methodology

3. Update the table of contents

Week 4 

1. Fix the table of contents and update it.

2. Wrote down the paragraph of  3.2

3. Finish the methodology part.

4. Update the table of contents page

5. Doing research implementation draft, trying to finish the methodology section and fix some issues.

Week 5

1. Start to write the introduction for the result and discussion section.

2. Update my table of contents and add details of research findings.

3. Writing the research finding part before discussion.

4. Start writing the result & discussion and try to finish it before the deadline.

Week 6

1. Write the acknowledgment, abstract and introduction within week 6 and try to finish them before next week Monday.

2. Watch PDF documents on Google Classroom that Ms Hayati gave us to see how to exactly write abstract and introduction

This week I have issues with writing the abstract part, maybe I need to watch the pdf that Ms Hayati gave us in google classroom again.

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Feedback 

Week 1
No feedback was given

Week 2 

Because I was disconnected, I wasn’t able to get Ms Hayati’s feedback.

Week 3

Table of contents is not very clear, so you need to rewrite it. In the matrix, the methodology is not clear, some of them are not quantitative & qualitative research. Need to change. In literature review, a part of writing is about air pollution, air pollution has nothing about character design, so you have to think before you write.

Week 4 

The progress remarks should be more describing what you need to do for this week. In the research implementation draft, methodology section, you need to add what questionnaire survey, is it quantitative, or qualitative, same as the observational studies.

Week 5

Ms Hayati said I need to start the research finding part first. The discussion part should be after writing the  research finding. Otherwise it’s difficult for me to begin the discussion writing.

Week 6

Ms Hayati said the progress remarks should have troubles you face with. If you have questions about how to write abstract. There is a pdf document in google classroom to help.